Writing for love is a pas

I love it. Nice character desriptions!!

I like the emotion. It was rather gollmy, but who am I to say that it can't be gloomy. You should just write whatever is in your heart. Sad, mad, ...

I can't stop laughin'. Godd job....gangsta'

I really liked the story, but could you space out some of it? I don't have time to nit-pic right now, so I'll be back! Great story though.

Whoo! Continue! Love the story. More chapters please!

Whewhh, this is a really good story amber. I loved every bit of it!

wow. The feeling here was powerful. I love it. Here come the butterflies! I, alond with a lot of people can relate to it. Excellent flow.

umm, well, the person that I'm writing it for wrote down how long that he had been going out with a girl, and stuff like that. I asked him why ...

Ahh, here come the butterflies. lovely, just lovely. *Tears of joy*

I don't know why you don't like writing poetry, but it's your choice. I really enjoyed this piece because I can feel the emotion. Excellent.

It is a sweet poem with lots of meaning. Nice.

Gahh! Do you have to end it here? Can you start a second book? Ahh, anyways, I loved it.

Whoa. i liked it. The ending was really suprising. Actually, I think the ending was the best part of the whole piece.

For writing it so quickly, it was great. I couldn't really feel the emotion. It was good, but who or what are we talking about in it? Please try to ...

AHHH! I really liked it. People need to stop being so harsh. Everyone pointed out everything, so I guess I'll give you some praise. *Good description *Thanks for mentioning a ...